I Dunno How I Feel Posting This Here, But She Was Very Active On Tumblr. I Figured It Doesn’t Hurt

In a vision of shadows the characters had actual dynamics that were fun and interesting like the medicine cats and twigkit, the background character had personality like Fernsong helping with the kits (He doesn't just help with him and Ivypool's kits, there's a scene where he's worried about Lilyheart's kit being sick), and I think the Kin was a fun and interesting villain group that realistically took power. The Erins didn't wimp out like they did with Splashtail and say that everyone in Shadowclan followed Darktail because he was threatening babies, they followed Darktail because they actually believed the Rowanstar was a bad leader and that Darktail would be better. Plus the mini character arcs of background characters like Juniperclaw, Yarrowleaf, and Sleekwhisker. There is so much going on in A Vision of Shadows that I can't mention it all. So all I have to say is, GO READ A VISION OF SHADOWS RIGHT NOW! IT WILL NOT DISAPPOINT!

I miss a vision of shadows so much, avos would never put tawnypelt and crowfeather together, avos had good writing, avos was the best arc, bring back whoever was writing avos.

yeah i'm mad

I couldn't agree more, it's just worse warrior cats and the average person is not going to enjoy

Mini review of Clouded moon

I was curious about the story, but I just can’t find the right words to explain it.

The writing felt dull, relying too much on telling rather than showing. For example, the explanation of the character’s tragic backstory lacked depth—it was just handed to the reader instead of being woven into the narrative.

I also couldn’t connect with most of the relationships, like Wildfur and Spottedshadow. They constantly talk about how much they love each other, yet their bond never truly comes to life on the page.

As for the deaths, they were painfully predictable. Instead of feeling sad, I was just frustrated—it all felt like forced emotional manipulation rather than natural storytelling.

Their world is barely explained. Sure, it’s like Warriors but with different names, but if I knew nothing about Warriors, I wouldn’t feel invested in the story.

I shouldn’t have to pay for your Patreon just to understand the story you’re trying to sell me.

Tenelle, I love your artwork, but writing novels just isn’t your strong suit.

Avalon, seriously, man—why didn’t you say anything about the prose?

Depending on how many people interact with this post I might release the first moon sooner.

Hello! This is my clangen blog TwilightClan! I didn't know if I wanted to start this because I'm too scared to put my drawings online but then I saw other people doing clangen blogs without drawing so I was inspired to make one! This is a lifegen blog and the readers will be the ones who decide what the main character does! So please stop by!

First Moon date: 11/15/24

all the pets! :3

IVYPOOL'S HEART IS AWSOME!

Like the part where she's dealing with her grief and thinks about how she sees bristlefrost in everything and some of the other moments actually made me tear up a little bit. Maybe that's just because the way she thinks when she was grieving was almost exactly like me. But I loved the book. Slate and Beach and their silly man cave made me laugh.

I just wanted to do Briarlight

I'm addicted to drinking lemon juice and eating lemons. I've eaten so many lemons whole and drunken so much lemon juice that I can't even really taste the sourness. Fresh lemon juice tastes better than lemon juice from concentrated lemon juice but all the fresh lemon juice is expensive and not in stores and concentrated lemon juice is in the one in all the stores and in big bottles :(

“Who Goes There? Whitestorm Teaches Border Tactics” is one of the greatest pieces of warrior cats literature to ever exist

Remember when a bunch of youtubers were talking about watertok and getting mad that the people were calling the flavored water stuff water? That was always kinda weird to me because like, that's got to be the least harmful tiktok community and a lot of them were just people who were trying to drink more water. It was also weird to me how they were like, "How can you not like the taste of water??" because I have super sensitive taste and I can't drink water out of cheap plastic bottles because the taste of plastic rubs off into the water. Idk man, whenever people made videos on them it just felt mean.