This Is Some More Of My Personal Art. This Character Is The Protagonist Of A Story I’m Writing, They’re

This is very good. Thought I should share

EBROwolf time for the spotlight and also by this time Barbie is out.

Does anyone know how to tell if your work is ok, I know constructive criticism can be helpful but I want to make sure the draft I give people to criticize is at least decent. I’m taking mainly about writing in this case as I can spot visual oddities in my artwork more easily than I can notice clunkiness in my writing. I’d love any advice anyone may have.

So I’ve been getting into journey to the west (Jttw) since I really enjoy the Lego Monkie kid series, and I noticed two things about the character the six eared macaque.

1 - some people said him and Sun Wukong were brothers. As far as I can tell there not at least not in Jttw, and in Monkie kid there sworn brothers.

2 - Macaque is not in the original Jttw as frequently as I expected, in fact he was there for only a brief time before getting killed. But there is a possibility he is the Macaque King (one of the seven fraternal sages) an ally Sun Wukong made early in the story.

In Lego Monkie kid Im pretty sure the seven fraternal sages are are Wukongs sworn brothers, since Demon bull king (DBK) is one of the seven fraternal brothers. I was wondering why in jttw it didn’t connect the macaque king and the six eared macaque and there are two options. 1 there different characters or 2 that it’s an inconsistency, the second options fairly likely since there are quite a few instances in jttw where if you think to hard the story doesn’t make sense.

Anyway Jttw is a fun read and if your looking for an easier way to absorb some of jttw, I’d suggest checking out an overly Saracastic production’s videos on YouTube.

Wanted to do more abstract background stuff. This characters name is Jackie she belongs to @vrissy-lalonde I inverted the colors for the charcter cause I wanted to play around with abnormal colors. This is my 4th Art fight attack.

Might delete this later might not.

I’m trying to remember the narrative issue where someone keeps raising the stakes till there’s nowhere else to go within fiction except to undo character progress. I’m not super certain what I’m thinking of but I’m trying to look up how to avoid raising the stakes so high that there’s then no where to go from there story wise. Idk if there’s a word for this lemme know if y’all have any input.

The liberated Palestinian child prisoner Yasser Za'imieh, who was freed today from "Megiddo" prison as a result of the prisoner exchange deal stated:

"The year I was in prison was difficult. They dealt with us with heavy violence and repression. On October 30th, they beat many prisoners. Prisoners died at their hands.

We learned from the news that three prisoners were martyred."

The interviewer corrected him that six prisoners were martyred.

"I didn't know. There were others, young children, whose heads were split open by the beatings. Young children, 10 and 12 years old, were being beaten. They dealt with us with the most intense violence.

"One plate of rice was given to eight prisoners. It was abnormal violence."

He continued, "Praise be to God, the prisoners in 'Megiddo' are doing well, but they are going through the most difficult conditions, difficult to the maximum.

"Just dry rice. They don't bring us meat, or fruit, or vitamins, or anything. We just had a mattress sheet and very thin sheets. We wake up cold at night, unable to sleep. We slept for just two or three hours."

"Since the war started, we faced extremely difficult conditions. The prisoners in general are suffering."

25 Nov 23 via RNN

Marcel Marwood Evolution sheet

I’ve been working and reworking this character for a year now and thought I’d share my progress I’d love to hear any constructive criticism hope everyone has a good day.

Made another thing :)

Finished an art piece for the first chapter of my story that I turned in for Creative Writing. This is the second version with extra details which unfortunately my classmates did not get.

Anyway pretty happy with this so I wanted to share!

Intentionally misgendering someone gives me the right to stab you.