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Hello there! Just found your blog and your wallpapers are so pretty! May I have a polysexual glowcore themed phone wallpaper? Much love and thanks so much!

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just gonna leave this here for anybody who wants it

free copies of:

the bonnie and clyde proshot

hadestown

the great gatsby(jeremy jordan)

dear evan hansen

jekyll and hyde

ride the cyclone

enjoy!

For @personwho1s and 1AMWolfram on Art Fight !

thank you to all my mutals it means alot that people see my art and like it : you guys are cool people:@cartoonist1004 @unearthlore @lin1feeling @icedfire87 @killerqueen58 @slowlykawaiidreamland@skzosh@meerealsssss@moonshinerachel@momochimchim@moonysfavoritetoast@littlemissartemisia@daratinavest@artflood@eddies-spaghetti @creppersfunpalooza @starlightdream44@tzuyu132132 @arrxdrawinffourlive @clownpalette@alphaomega-world @catinasink @pizza-feverdream @lady-stardust-incarnate@starmanlupinn@puffpastrycrimewatch @theblackat333 @space-rocc@autism-criminal@yourfavoriteforrest@ineedtherapyofc@jellyserval @godofautism@thedarkestnephilim@vintagemiserie @m3l0man14c@lexxthekapibara@alexthescaredenby @shrimpysstufff @vampiricsoup@flametiger77 @michaud-joshua-x1496 @pinkpupppp @dreamcloud122 @unniebeans@genesisfurr@sauljudgeman@halfawitchwinter@mrseeker@dookthecaos @davidthespider@shaibonbon @foxundermoon @gojosatouruusagisanan @xxx-ang3l-w1th-a-sh0tgun-xxxx @that-weird-kid-from-your-schoolol @kananri@incomprehensible-screaming @clear-chaos-collection@snakeinabagl@thatotherman001 @thatonepizzaman@senpa10

you earn a crying happy ponia wich is rare since she "never cries" (or really is happy)✨🌸

Thank you for 70 follows 🦆

thanks to everyone.✨🌸

so here's a stupid thing i made for it

thx mutals you guys are so nice

Oh my gosh so cute! @generalfabulous​ and I are very happy you like the boys so much c:

a gift for the boys of @just-plain-lunacy have a trash potato

Thanks so much! For the compliment and the playlist ^^. The songs are just perfect! ’Flesh and bone‘ is actually one of my favorite songs, so seeing that one here made me smile. (Also: it’s true, isn’t it? If you ever want an OC aesthetic moodboard, drop by ;)).

I don't know if you are still doing the mini playlists? I've got Tungsten. He's sweet, nervous and shy, but once he sets his mind to something, he'll do it, trembling fingers and all. He wishes above all to have a group of people where he feels he belongs. He hopes to find that in a band of traveling magicians/artists he has joined. He always wears a tophat, in which his pet (Milton) lives. He dislikes heritage and does not want to leave anything behind. He's bisexual. Thanks so much!!!

awww he sounds adorable!! (also, love your url)

mini playlist:

1. blue lips, regina spektor

2. flesh and bone, keaton henson

3. unsteady, x ambassadors

4. echo, jason walker

5. not about angels, birdy

Writing Subplots

Who doesn’t love a good subplot? Some of my favorites books are the ones that have super interesting subplots because who doesn’t love hearing about that secondary character development arc or those lovely side characters with the inevitably doomed romance? What’s not to like? But, subplots can often be one of the hardest to write and the most misunderstood storytelling elements. They aren’t part of the main narrative thread, so they can’t overtake it, but they also need to have their own story arc separate from the main plot. It’s a delicate balance that can be kind hard to strike, because subplots aren’t just secondary plot-lines, they have to serve a narrative purpose and engage with the story’s central conflict. 

First, let us define some different kinds of subplots

Mirror Subplot: A subplot where a side character experiences a conflict that mirrors the protagonist’s main conflict and gives the protagonist the insight or motivation they need to resolve their own conflict.

Romantic Subplot: The protagonist’s relationship with a love interest complicates their journey to resolve the story’s central conflict.

Parallel Subplot: a subplot where something seemingly unrelated occurs at the same time as the main plot and then all of a sudden the two plots collide towards the end of the book.

Complicating Subplot: a subplot where a secondary character’s actions actively complicates the protagonist’s journey with the central conflict

Foil Subplot: a subplot where a secondary character experiences the same or a very similar conflict as the protag but wants to resolve that in a different way (this contracts or creates a “foil” that highlights the protagonists qualities and characteristics)

There are a lot more different kinds of subplots, but these are some of the most common, so here are some tips for writing subplots!

Is That Necessary? 

This is the first question we should ask ourselves anytime we add anything to our stories, but especially subplots. Sometimes, authors (meaning me) will get to the end of writing their first draft and realize that they are not anywhere close to their goal word count. To remedy this, they will just throw in a cute little subplot. Unfortunately, friends, this does not work. The best, effective subplots should be integral to a story’s central conflict. If you can remove your subplot from the story without their being a big impact on the central conflict, then the subplot doesn’t really serve a strong narrative purpose. We most often see this problem arise in romantic subplots. Authors will just throw in a romance or the dreaded love-triangle as a subplot for absolutely no reason. I’m the first person to admit I love a good romantic subplot, but I also like it to be there for a good reason. That is why the Hunger Games will never go out of my top five all time books/series because despite what a lot of people think the romantic subplot in that story is essential. Katniss and Peeta’s love story is the reason they both survive the Games which is the central conflict of the book. It works perfectly, and if you want a good example of a subplot done well, look no further.

Keep the SUB in Subplot

Honestly, sometimes the subplot really is better than the main plot. That’s not necessarily a good thing, but I think we have all read a book where the main plot just drags and you just can’t wait to get back to your favorite side characters and their little adventure. But, a good subplot shouldn’t steal the limelight from the main plot. It should enhance the main plot and maybe add a layer of complexity but never overshadow. Going back to my example for the day, the Hungers Games does a really good job of this. I read something once where someone said Katniss’s romance overshadows the Games and the Rebellion, and I was like, did we read the same book? If you go back and read the books, Katniss doesn’t think about her romance with Gale or Peeta all that much. She’s mostly thinking about her own survival and the survival of her family. Both of which relate directly to the main plot. We never forget about the romance in the book because it is important, but in my opinion, it never overshadows the main plot of the Games and the Rebellion even in the first book where it’s more heavily featured. 

But, Its Still A Plot

On the flip-side of that, even though the subplot shouldn’t overshadow the main plot, it still needs to follow its own narrative arc. This is where a lot of new author’s get lost. A subplot is way more than just a short conversation or a quick event that inconveniences or helps the protagonists. All your subplots need their own beginning, middle, and end. Make sure that you definitely developed all of your story’s subplots accordingly. That includes paying attention to all of your characters’ goals, motivations, and the conflict that they experience. Generally when I’m in the development stages of the subplot, I develop it the same way that I develop one of my main plots. While they do not necessarily need the same attention or development as your main plot, developing them with the same goals in mind will only help you in the long run!

some fucking resources for all ur writing fuckin needs

* body language masterlist

* a translator that doesn’t eat ass like google translate does

* a reverse dictionary for when ur brain freezes

* 550 words to say instead of fuckin said

* 638 character traits for when ur brain freezes again

* some more body language help

(hope this helps some ppl)

OKAY, finally off work, here is that feedback I promised you.

This is gonna be a picky one because I genuinely love what I’m reading. So we’ll start with the praise! Pacing is flawless throughout, everything flows so naturally together. My favorite instance of this is when the narrator (whoever it may be) shifts from talking about the multiple therapist to the old woman…

“It's as if her thoughts were too "explicit" to render, one man said. But he was a man, not an elderly woman who says she promises to never tell anybody what she doesn't want them to know.”

Some of the imagery described is disturbingly beautiful. The picture of our girl in front of a mirror dropping pills into the sink and listening to the clinks is *chef’s kiss*. The scene that continues after this contains that same charm.

Feedback

As I said I’m gonna have to get a little nit-picky. The line “the thought of her medicine faded as quickly as she came as her eyes began to blur…” reads a little awkwardly. I’m not sure if you meant to just say “the thought of her medicine faded as quickly as her eyes blurred”. I’m not sure what “as she came” is referring to. “Is she dying?” is asked twice. At “her girlfriend speaks to her again, desperately murmuring her name like a praise to gain her attention”, I would find a word other than “murmuring” maybe mumbling. Lastly but certainly not least I would have liked to see more effort from the girlfriend to help our girl out other than “murmuring” her name. Unless this was intentional then ignore me on this.

TYSM FOR THE FEEDBACK!! sorry if I'm late to respond as I've been busy with chores today-

It was rather early when I wrote that, and I checked over it twice, but I definitely agree with your response! I'm glad you enjoyed the story, as there will be more to come (when I don't spend all night doing random shit). I ain't the best writer, and I always appreciate anything, even a correction or two. "Murmuring" was meant to be there because they were trying not to startle Naomi further, if they shout at her, it would've gone worse. But the "blur" part? I think you can tell I was trying to put a bunch of words together in the end to try and make it make sense.

Thank you so much for the feedback, I'll write more tomorrow!

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I hope your day's been wonderfull as well!

Five things that make me happy are:

My family

Chunky little Bumblebees when they plop down into flowers

Marshmallows

Fix-it fanfiction

Doodling on my table