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I’m trying to prove a point
So I know this is often played for comedy but
Tranquilliser darts??
😳😳😳
Idk man but theres the initial pain of getting hit, the confusion or panic, the slow stumbling collapse to the ground.
Then your antagonist waltzes on over all smug and scoops them up like a sack of potatoes. Yeah❤️
Uhhh heres a weird little drabble for the first one fjjdjsje
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It was the first time I'd ever seen him sit still.
Always in a rush, he is. A constant blur of arms and legs. A flurry of movement.
He wouldn't stop jabbering in the car.
It's like he said every word that went through his brain.
I couldn't get a word in, not that I tried.
And the waiting.
Either his leg was bouncing at 1000 miles per hour or he was pacing back and forth as if he was being persued. Every so often he'd get up to go pester the nurse again before sulking back to his seat when there was no new information.
When we were finally called, he practically leaped out of the chair. He interrogated the nurse on the way to the room, walking at a pace that was clearly hard for her to keep up with. Impossibly long strides and darting eyes, he was.
And that's when we arrived at the room.
And that's when he saw you.
And he froze.
Then, gingerly, he made his way over to your bed, sitting softly in the seat adjacent.
He hadn't taken his eyes off you, I'm not entirely sure he'd even blinked since seeing you.
He hesitantly reached a hand out but halted an inch away, as if you might crumble at the slightest touch.
He looked to me, stuttering out "Can,,, Can I,,,??"
Just as soon as I had nodded, he had carefully taken your hand, pulling it a little closer to himself.
And honestly, I couldn't blame him for his caution.
There, laying dead to the world on that hospital bed, you seemed so small. So fragile. So helpless.
The nurses had done a good job of cleaning you up but the dark bruises on your skin were impossible to ignore. The stark white bandages seemed as if they might be the only thing holding you together. The careful stitches didn’t do much to hide the bright red lines.
The inherent feeling of just how wrong this felt, seeing you injured and unconscious when you should be happy and healthy. How you should be at home right now, playing some kind of game with the others when instead you were here in this hospital.
And so he sat still.
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First time I’ve ever posted something like this on here lmao hope it was alright
I’m such a sucker for the Chaotic character going all soft for their injured friend and also the Coolheaded Wise character going batshit crazy for their injured chaos friend.
That’s some good shit.
Character b, bloody and disheveled, stumbling into Character As room/house. With a desperate look, b collapses to the floor.
Kidnapping whump can be so good, theres so many options,,,
Do they get drugged and wake up in an unfamiliar place?? Do they get a gun dug into their back and a whispered threat to comply?? Do they get jumped on the street and manhandled into a van??
What about once they’re there?? How do they react?? Are they stoic and unbreakable?? Defiant and quippy?? Or are they terrified, begging to be let go?? Do they cry?? Scream?? Or stay silent no matter what??
And what do their captors want?? Information?? Does b tell?? Or perhaps they want to send a message, to hurt someone close to b. Or maybe its personal, maybe they just want b.
What do they do to b?? Just rough them up a bit?? A couple strong punches or kicks?? Some threats, maybe?? Or do they go further?? Broken fingers, water boarding, whips?? Severed toes, extracted teeth, eye puncture?? Do they condition them or use non con or dehumanize them??
How does it end?? Are they rescued by their team, friends, caretaker or even enemy?? Do they escape on their own or with other victims?? Are they set free, after the captors are done with them?? Does their story end with the sweet release of death?? Or does it never end??
Ahhhhh, kidnapping,,,
((Any feedback is greatly appreciated!))
Okay but manhandling??
Getting forced roughly to their knees ((perhaps with a gun pointed at their face))
Getting roughed up as a threat ((and their friends/caretaker finding out))
Slammed against a wall
Arms twisted painfully behind their back
A hand harshly covering their mouth
An arm wrapped around their neck, back flush against their captor
Grabbed by the hair
Grabbed around the midsection and lifted as they struggle
Grabbed by their shirt collar and pinned against a wall
Yeah,,, manhandling very good
Based on the results of this poll.
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Whumpee's hands shake from pain and exhaustion and henchman rips their shirt apart, revealing their back. Exposed to whumper, whumpee closes their eyes when they hear them walk closer.
Warm hands touch their cold skin, leaving goosebumps on their way. They hear whumper scoff, who bows down so their mouth is right next to whumpee's ear.
"Your old scars will be nothing against what is about to follow," they coo and walk back again, whumpee bracing themself for the pain that comes with the crack of the whip.
The burning sensation makes them grunt, but it's not enough to make them scream. Again and again, the thundering crack rings in whumpee's ears, hot blood running down their back now.
Whumpee's body shakes from pain, their mind racing, wanting it to stop. Barely holding onto consciousness, whumpee coughs and closes their eyes. The whip licks at their skin another time.
desperately need more stereotypically noncon whump tropes used in completely nonsexual whump scenes
weeks after being rescued whumpee finds a video of their torture on the darknet with millions of views and sickening comments
whumpee worrying/thinking that whumper is right about that whumpee being high on the pain means whumpee likes what whumper is doing to them
whumpee who is fine otherwise until someone does something relatively mild that whumpee associates with the whump. whumpee getting instant flashbacks and being reduced to a shell of themselves for the time being / pales immediately, not getting out a single word, completely frozen like a deer in headlights
rescued whumpee worrying that everyone who interacts with them secretly harbors the desire to hurt whumpee for their own enjoyment. that no one can see them as human, that everyone sees them as just a punching bag
whumpee who freezes with wide eyes at the slightest sign of violence against them
whumpee who is incredibly embarrassed about what whumper did to them
"it's your fault you look so punchable" / whumper victim blaming whumpee
whumpee being scared caretaker might drop their act and behave like whumper
WHUMP PROMPT - #3
Things that a whumper may like about a gagged whumpee.
The utter helplessness of it. Having taken away both their physical mobility with restraints and now the only "weapon" they had left. No more retorts. No more cursing. No more refusing. Reduced to no more than a wriggling, moaning, thing. Of which the whumper has complete control.
Perhaps they like the sounds. The ragged, quickened breath through the nose. The muffled humming of each would-be-word they uselessly try to push out.
Perhaps they find it all humorous. Perhaps they like the embaressment it affords their victim. Perhaps they just like the look in their whumpee's eyes, the helpless glaring as their lips are so beautifully sealed behind a length of tape, or cloth.